Monday, October 27, 2008
Essay Revision Letter
First, I'd like to thank Allison for her feed back on my essay. A lot of the suggestions are very helpful, because I had noticed most of them, but couldn't correct them... beeeecause I have the same view point as myself. Basically, it's nice to have someone see it from the outside to give you new ideas.
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I totally agree with what you're saying. Its almost impossible to edit a paper completely on your own, because of course you know what you're trying to say and think you make good points. Its just too bad one can't assume everyone else thinks exactly as they do; this would be much easier.
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